All Comments on 'The Day After'

by TheIceGoddess

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CAP811CAP811over 16 years ago
Must be his wife's fault

Who would have thought that adultery could be so much fun?

northbaybearnorthbaybearover 16 years ago
Ah! What adventure awaits!

Great story, as fantasy. A wee bit more complicated, in real life. But, we're here for fantasy, so what the fuck!

Hot, quick, and animalistic fucking. I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yummy!

This story is so delicious, I love it! I really hope you continue to write about these two and we get to learn more about them and their sexual adventures!

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Nice twist

The boss better set aside a chunk of money. He'll need it to pay alimony before too long. He's enjoying a hot flirtation, but sooner or later one has to pay for his fun. Well-written.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Lousy

A tale about a cheating asshole jerkoff husband. What's good about that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Quite good

Well written but slightly lacking tension. Please continue to write these stories.

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