by briadams
I gave you another 5 stars.
Great and very exciting vignettes.
Great story!
I really liked. An story with feelings, love and sex, of coarse!
Very good job!
Forty years? That's patience, love, and caring. But again it started in the 60's. In todays world I wonder if it would be possible????? But the idea of caring about the other first.....that's the heart of it. Sharing the heart and soul, and the rewards of everything else. GP
it is very jarring to have the mom in this chapter since you killed her off before this, kills all continuity and makes you look like even more of a HACK.
what about the rest of thier lives friends and family kids after mom dies?
I just finished all three of your stories. They are wonderful-warm, loving, tender, caring, sexy-and seem very real. I am very surprised that you have not written more--many, many more stories. You seem to have a very special gift and talent for capturing the very essence of life. Congratulations on your writings.
LC