All Comments on 'The Day Our Lives Started - Complet'

Other than the occasional miss with "your' & You're", the story line was good.

But it was disjointed. You could have just continued with the first chapter and made a good story but you abruptly killed Mom off, that sort of put a damper on the following parts. The way you put it together is the only complaint I have, otherwise it was a very good story.

I have really enjoyed the entire story. Thanks.

I don`t know if is a sequel, a prequel, or an story explanation, but was very well.

I liked.

A well done story. One of the best I have seen on here.

I gave you 5 stars. I love the way you express the loving feeling of the three of them. A very loving family and exciting interactions.

A very good story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++