All Comments on 'The Day the Sun Turned Red'

I mean, if you don't even know why they should be going to school, then how the fuck can you write about anything else?

Sorry to hear that, thanks for your comment.

I think that when you don't have the power to affect an major event, you can either go on with your life or kiss your ass goodbye and hide under your bed. It's not always the best solution but the asskissing and bed hiding is usually much more useless.

Also, don't empower haters by responding.

Intriguing mindfuck. 5/5

Started posting recently, more or less the first one I encounter. Many of those around here? I thought that the possibility to moderate the comments would keep them at bay... Anyway, thanks for the comment and for the advice.

Just a suggestion, but having just read all your fiction, you might want to change them up in the future as they are all pretty much the same. Not using the same 'twist' ending for them every time would be a start. Also, your vamps are so OP they tend to be a little dull. Not hating or anything but the endings are very abrupt as well.

Thanks for the comment, I've put my head into writing recently, so it's a work inprogress and any and all critics apreciated. Quick question though what do you mean by OP?

I liked the twist at the end, it was nice. You've got a good plot. On the other hand your pacing seems forced, too fast.