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to the people who bought my book, "Naked Town, Naked Lives," published under the name "Ellen Pierce Melville. I know readers say that the first chapter is very hard to take, with Guy's helpless balls the center of the party, but take my word, please, that after that things get A LITTLE less traumatic and a lot more sexual. Not that virtually every chapter isn't about BDSM. This is a book about a couple that seeks a "second honeymoon"--some excitement in a sex life gone dull--and finds it but a surprising craving for dominance and submission in every form... Thanks again. Now, if a few people would write a brief Amazon review, we might get this fucker rolling...

ClodiaP

For ending this dismal excuse for erotica. And while you're at it, perhaps you should consider ending your career as a writer. It obviously isn't paying very well as you are shamelessly hyping your online books which, I am certain, are as worthless as your posts here.

What a super weird ending!! ;))

worst, disjointed mess ever.