All Comments on 'The Dead World Ch. 01'

Lotta typos, but an engaging story. Kudos!

@MetaBob

Thank you kindly. An obnoxious number of typos, I know, my humblest apologies! I’m going to do another round of editing—for the second time—and hopefully catch them all this go-round. 😂

I badly need an Editor, because I have the attention span of a goldfish. I always seem to miss something.

With your permission, when I read chapter 2, I will send feedback.

@MetaBob

I’d love to hear your thoughts, and thank you kindly for your time. My apologies in advance for what I’m sure are copious typos there as well, my younger self thought writing on a phone was a fantastic idea.

The beginning of something amazing 😍

Okay, ya got me. I'm in. Love a good zombie tale. Looking forward to working my way through the series as I can.

you have an amazing ability to write a story with no sex and hook the reader enough to come back for the next chapter. it's really quite remarkable.

please stop giving character 3 different names, its hard enough to learn the names of so many characters in one chapter

@lolololita - This series consists of groups of survivors (5+ characters), and they have two names... their government first and last name, and the name they've adopted after the world went to hell. It's got plot focus and purpose, so if that's a turn off for you, I'll suggest you bow out now... it doesn't change. :D