All Comments on 'The Deal'

by savannadavidson

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Break the engagement

What future can have a marriage with her fiancé?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow!

Very powerful story. Congrats!

erotikoserotikosalmost 9 years ago
Fiancee? What fiancee?

An exquisite tale dear Susan, very well written with excellent grammar, spelling and punctuation, with an interesting plot twist to boot. Do keep up the good work, and write on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Subs are the best

A woman who submits totally to her man with both pleasure and pain is the ideal woman - blackmailing her adds a lot to

LOAnnie2LOAnnie2over 8 years ago
Nice job

If this is your first story as it looks like you did a great job. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

dirtball

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