All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 08'

That was yet again another fun interesting twist. Love it!

Thanks and see you next Friday.

This is a great story but I really want the kid to fuck her...

Man you responded quickly - I saw your comment at 4am. Thanks - at this point I am trying to develop a rich setting and taking advantage of the potential. Glad you are enjoying it. Take care

Thanks for the comment and compliment - they are definitely drawn to each other but their sense of right and wrong are colliding.

This was basically a dialog and not a story. I'm really thinking about writing the next chapter for you and since you only post once a week, I could beat you to it.

Take the cow out to pasture and shoot her

heh.... you could beat me on the post - but not on the writing. I actually wrote and had posted here on Literotica Chapter 8 and 9 back in 2012 or 2013. I just finished the first complete draft of chapter 30 this past weekend.

Especially these early chapters there is a flow in a much more episodic manner on purpose. As we go the story arc does get more focused and driven but there is still a sense of scenes and yes a lot of dialogue.

Wow - hey Corey - I thought I lost you back two chapters ago. Yeah, not much has changed stylistically and it doesn't.

Your comment made me laugh. I did put it out to pasture, and in essence shot it, as I pulled it along with all my other work from Literotica two years ago - it's only back because so many people asked for it and wanted to see an ending, so that is what I'm going to do.

Where's chapter 9?? As of right now it's Saturday March 11, and chapter 9 is nowhere to be found.

we getting somewhere

That slow burn is moving a bit faster!

Fantastic...I am as hard as Matt

My apologies - I had it down to a pattern of submitting on Tuesdays and the story would appear for readers on Friday. Something went wrong at this point and posting slowed down horribly. I don't know why.

I'm glad all the first series is completely out and available now.

Again sorry and thanks for your patience.

Hey PrinceLuke - yeah we're getting somewhere and I hope you are happy with the location so to speak!

Thanks for commenting and hope you continue to enjoy the journey.

Hi arrowglass - things are happening, things are moving - glad you are enjoying it!

Well, thank you very much for your physical approval - that's why I write erotica! Glad you are enjoying it. I always like sex to be fun so making a game out of it is always cool to me.

Thanks again - LF

Teasing is more fun than graphic edginess

Do Matt and Diana plan to fuck anytime soon

If not let me know

Cause I'm seriously thinking about stopping

This is Chapter 8 for crying out loud 😒

This story flows smoothly and logically. The mother's attitude about love and sex is correct. I hope she can teach that to her son. I also hope she learns that the love for her son enables her to make love to her son. This remains a 5 star series.

Great story - despite some of the complaints - I really love the buildup!