All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 26'

Discovery is a wonderful thing. Cindy's discoveries. The Hollister sisters discoveries. The discovery of Mr. Deforest's interest in Diana. And I do believe we will find out about the Hollister sisters and their uncle.

Keep them coming good sir/madam(?).

I am loving the reposting of this series, I don't remember the first too well so I don't notice the changes and its like reading it for the very first time.I can tell you are lining up some happy endings and that is great. I am not sure how I feel about all the new characters, Mr Deforest's new expanded appearances and of course the Hollister sisters. Time will tell and you are telling it fabulously. It seems Diana's romance will take a new arc with Mr Deforest. I know its probably for the best but I saw no reason she couldn't end up with Matt and Cindy as a loving poly unit. I hope these new characters don't distract fromt he main story too much or cause undue complications. I will definitely stay with this one until the end either way

I'm really enjoying your story. I hope for & look forward to future installments!

Just love the way this series gets on with such sublime surprises. Are the sisters going to join in the fun...just imagine a bevy of fox tails/tales? ;)

Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next! The details you have creatd for each character really brings the story to life.

Hey krak! Great comment - that is exactly what I'm exploring - discoveries - learning new things and taking chances. I'm so glad you like it. Please keep me posted as we continue.

Hey Tiki! thanks for your great comment as well. I'm poly so the dynamics fit fine here. It could easily be three. I also don't see an age issue in that dynamic either. As I hate spoilers I don't want to get into it too much yet in comments but would love to continue this discussion as more is revealed. I'm also very glad you commented so I could find your work as well. I've read two so far and love them. You have a very nice sweet yet hot style that I love. I very much look forward to reading more of your work and heartily recommend (based on what I've read so far) any reader here to check out your author page!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy this. I have up to chapter 30 in the submission queue right now. They probably will appear one per day. Tomorrow I will put in the last three chapters as the series will end with Chapter 33.

Hey Arrowglass! Thanks and I'm very glad you are enjoying the series so much. I believe you have just binge read things. I do have up to Chapter 30 in the submission queue so I expect you will see one per day appear. Tomorrow I will put the rest of the series (up through 33) into the queue. Please keep in touch, I love your comments.

Thanks - I've really grown to love these characters. I've written many, many characters throughout my career but Diana, Mat,t Cindy and gang have really captivated me.

I'm so glad you enjoy them as well.

i gave this a five star as it was a job well done but i dont liks thd voyeur bit of the story.

Love Cindy anal fucking. Matt is finally doing some fucking