All Comments on 'The Dealer's Girl Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
CRAP

This is complete SHIT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good

I find it very good. Next part, please

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I like it

This is a great story. I've always been fascinated with tattoos, so maybe include some backstory on when, where, why David got his tattoos.

mdwdirectmdwdirectover 10 years ago
More! Keep going!

I love it. This is an excellent story idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
lets keep it going..

didn't find another dealer for a while. Then no girl like that girl. then soem memories then another meeting when she is not in the dealers place.

mcollectmcollectover 10 years ago
I want more

This is a great beginning, can't wait to see the rest. 5*

gja360gja360over 9 years ago

Can't wait to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Story ! Please Continue

A fitting second story is Matthew gets arrested and his place raided Marie has no

Other place to go other than Daves for a few nights.

I'll let you finish the rest !

Good Luck

Will

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