All Comments on 'The Death of Jenny'

I'm really looking forward to seeing where you are going with this. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this story...

Congratulations so far as the descriptive language is absolutely wonderful and you've created a great hook x

beautiful

Kind of hard to make total sense of what you gave us, but it appears to be the younger woman who a married man brought into his home and promised marriage. But, the picture in the night stand might mean the man went back to his wife and the young woman was left with only memories and an empty house. Definitely fertile ground for a continuation of the story.

but now she is going home. TK U MLJ LV NV

So sad. How quickly and thoroughly you made me care about Jenny. Very nice. I'd like to read more.

I wasn't sure if this was a romantic ghost story until the end.