All Comments on 'The Debt'

Very Nice. If you're American, It helps if you've seen some of Guy Ritchie's films ("Lock, Stock, and Two Smoking Barrels", "Snatch")to get the sense of the London Underworld.

That was the best story I've read in ages!

The racial degradation was a bit much, but if that's what she wanted...then I'm glad she liked the story.

Third flat on the right, the key is under the mat. :)

Very fun to read your work, curls the toes and makes me give the husband the hot and lingering eye. Having just been to a Bengali wedding this very weekend, the visuals were rather sharp form me and lurid with color. Thank you for sharing. Willow Rain

HOT HOT HOT!!

Talyn

Her emotions are so exquisite....

Amazing, as all your stories are. Thank you.

it was soo hot.. i loved it..

Oh my. Yes, very hot. Good for her.

I don't know how you managed to write something so insanely hot yet tasteful but you did. The story line was detailed but not wordy and had me cheering for the main characters development from despair to enlightenment.

Did i mention it was hot?

I'm glad to say I enjoyed the story very much, despite my anger towards Dhipa's brothers...my god I wanted them to die while I read this...anyway not many erotic stories make me react so well, physically I mean, not just mentally.

Kay so in lamens terms I'm fiercely turned on haha...only my own personal erotic stories have been able to bring me to this state, so wether or not you appreciate it, I believe you've got talent in erotic writing and I'm definitely going to read more of your stories; well done.

It's a shame I am having troubles logging in to literotica, I'd have preferred to post this comment via my account, but I couldn't wait to figure out what's wrong with my login. I simply had to post this comment now.

Seriously the best story I think I've read on this site. Beautifully written and expressive,with a subject that could have been so easily predictive and vulgar instead a true delight to read with simply amazing descriptive turns of phrase. Once again Bravo.

we need a sequel! Loved the story.

That was great.Thank you.

That was so amazing! It wasn't just, "genitalia,fuck, genitalia, genitalia, fuck," it was one of the most incredible stories I've read in my life. I loved the ending the most! The emotion and the humanity of the whole story was so intense.

I think I understand why you put this into the Non-Consent/Reluctance category. At the start of the story it is clearly non-consensual. You then wove a tale of reluctant seduction, showing us her slide through reluctance into self-realization, and beyond. By the end, we have left the category entirely. Still, it is far from Romance, and though it could fit, perhaps, in Erotic Couplings the opening would not.

The story was brilliantly told, well written, hot on the surface, and smouldering beneath. Thanks.

Great story! I loved the twist at the end. I was not expecting them to stay together. One of the best stories I've ever read here. Hope you keep putting more great stories out.

sorry to say, but this to be the weediest of your stories so far.

Don't get me wrong, your stories are still way above the average, but like said in the header this time you repeated the pretty much same phrases all over + having may unnecessary typos which need reading two or three times to find out what the correct word should be

Very Special Story.

Of course we don’t like her situation or the family dynamics that put her in it and led her to even worry about her brothers, but I do like that she discovered her real sexual self. The kissing was a nice touch and a very clear sign she had surrendered to her own lust, but was hoping she’d have used her mouth on him in the end. Thank you

Nicely done, doc. Good exploration of her thoughts and mixed motives; this made the ending

plausible, if the stuff of fantasy. Lots of nice delays: just when you think some specific predictable thing

will happen, it doesn't. The reader is teased and captured.

Absolutely fantastic. Well written, believable, passionate, erotic and stimulating. Please think of a follow up as she's perfect at being his private slut