All Comments on 'The Debt'

... but not erotic, and lacking - to me - a point

Agreed, no point to the story and her interaction with jimmy at the end meant nothing

since there was no real story between other than she owed him money

Gangbang stories are a dime a dozen on this site. It would have help to know why she owed him the money.

It's more a sad story of a helpless woman than erotica.

I thought of it as an account of an event given in court.

In any event, it is a very powerful story and well written.

The sad thing about the story is that you never saw jimmy again. I think that you really enjoyed having to do a train. If jimmy stuck around, I think that the two of you would have made an excellent pipm and whore team.

I'm not sure why all the complaints?

Barely 5% of the stories on this site are as well-written as this one.

A touch of sentimentality without being overdone. I liked it.

Quality of the work here is stellar

If this author keeps writing I expect we will see some real literature here