by sexwar
The whole thing seems to be nothing more than a Freudian insight on your own insecurities. None of the female victims "deserve" the fate that befalls them, they simply exist to be "put in what you deem to be their places". Their is no point to these stories other than to reveal the opinions of the author.
Eh I actually really like this. Misogyny is a turn on for me (and I'm a woman and a feminist... go figure)
The basic idea is good but the execution is spoiled by wooly thinking.
Dear Author,
The premise is fine...the writing of the vignettes could use a bit of improvement. A little more detail on how and how much time it took these women to be broken would've improved them. The description doesn't have to be over the top but was it pain? Pleasure? Total domination? Humiliation? Drugs? Brainwashing? A combination of all of it or just some? These where hinted at but with no real detail.