All Comments on 'The Delightful Surprise'

A nice view of how a mother should react when desired bi son

Yes, the sex was kind of rushed, but only because the characters had had time to ponder things over. It's difficult to believe a story in which a mom who had never had sexual thoughts for her son suddenly strips and fucks him. The measured reaction you described seemed more believable, and provided an opportunity for her to consider what to do. My advice: keep things believable, or at least in the realm of "possible". Also, stay away from "foot long cocks" and "GG breasts" (unless you're writing a cartoon or a parody). Looking forward to your next project, whether it's a new story or a continuation of this one.

This was an excellent story and like others have said kind of rushed but, there is great potetial in further chapters being written for this! I look forward to reading even more!

Quite a few mom's have discovered son's saved stories or porn history. Often the knowledge is used to tease and arouse son. Many opportunities and reactions are possible.

Needs some background and buildup. Also what's the father situation? Looking forward to the sequel.

Very erotic and naughty story, enjoyed reading it but short

I'm sorry, Interpreter, you asked for comments and I'll be harsh. I didn't get past the first hundred words before I was 'forced' to stop reading. The line, 'What is this Bradley.' Obviously it was a question so of course should have ended 'with' a question mark. A very small oversight on your part, I agree, but if the story continued with the same or similar omissions I'd find it quite intolerable. So I stopped reading.