All Comments on 'The Delivery Pt. 01'

the 'Reader' was NOT there and did NOT take part so the entire story has no vestige of believability!!

Hey, Anon! You would be my very first ever comment on Literotica! Thanks for taking the time to read my story...I'm sorry you weren't thrilled. I do write a lot of my stuff in the first person, going for a "POV" you-are-there kind of effect. Very sorry if that didn't come across. I also often write to an unspecified "you" who is the woman (or the main woman) in the story. I find writing this kind of content passively in the 3rd person to be less intense and not as exciting. I notice you posted the same exact comment on another of my submissions. I'm guessing you aren't going to like very much of my stuff. I'd also have to warn you off of things like Edgar Allan Poe's "Tell-tale Heart". It's written in the same first-person voice, so you probably aren't going to like it, either. Anyway, thanks again for reading!!