All Comments on 'The Demon Ch. 04'

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I read the entire series just because you can write, unlike so many others here. I hope you continue to write.

Generally I liked the concept of the story but I think the plot was a little rushed. Maybe your future works will show improvement but overall good job and gratz on finishing this series :)

Any chance there's a sequel coming down the line, or something more set in this universe you've created?

Please continue telling Shyla's story!! Im sure a sequel where she & the demon have a consensual relationship, and have other adventures, would be well received.

Hey, cool story. You should totally make more about them. A relationship between the demon and shyla... That would be awesome.

For those who don't get why he has blue eyes now (assuming his previous eye color was normal for a demon and not caused by being bound)...

"I stripped just enough power from the nearest source to heal myself."

Great world you've created. I certainly hope this isn't the only glimpse the rest of us will have into it!