All Comments on 'The Derelict'

Good concept and the character was interesting. Not enough of everything else. The sex was bland, despite a great opportunity for a tentacle scene. Bringing in hundreds of more females without bringing in space marines was ignored.

I look forward to your next attempt.

And I was starting to love this. HP Lovecraft meets HR Giger to do Eclipse Phase. This was going so well until the tentacles. Is this site anime central now?

Reveal the monster! Do it bit by bit. Do it slowly, sneakily but don't hide it behind the vagueness of a bunch of tentacles.

It had so much promise.

If she is the queen why is she not producing eggs herself? Why would hey need her at all?