All Comments on 'The Descending of Jessica Ch. 06'

by Jessie92

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tangentjokertangentjokerover 10 years ago
Great Job

I love the inclusion of the support group. Keep it up. This series is remarkable. I read all six chapters in order. When did you save the world from zombies? jk

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 10 years ago
Nicely done

I am enjoying this couple more and more and I am happy to see them behaving in a sensible manner rather then just sex hungry fools. You do story good. I noticed a few words that should have been fixed (like 'not' instead of 'hot') So you might want to see about an editor or maybe waiting a day or so before you do corrections (this helps)I do approve of the "molten body of fuck" thought. Your humor and intelligence helps this one along and I am waiting for more.

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