All Comments on 'The Descent'

Not sure how you managed to do it, but you made a believable romance blossom in a not quite as believable whorehouse. The ethics lessons were a nice bonus.

This was the first time I had the opportunity to read your work. I enjoyed it. I am looking forward to reading some additional pieces.

I guess I went to the wrong school. I had to endure the insufferable intellectual mind games of Philosophy but missed out on the nooky club. Kant was way too cerebral. Ethics is not all in your head. It needs to include your heart too. At least Schopenhauer had some passion and was familiar with Buddhism.

At last, a good novella with halfway believable characters and some intellectual content! Really enjoyed this one and hope to read far more from you in the future!

Nicely done in every way!

I could certainly come up with several different endings - some continuing for much longer - but this was a good one and finished up everything in a good way. No complaints at all, except for the vote average that should be higher.