All Comments on 'The Desert Island'

You didn't achieve 'Blue Lagoon' or even 'Cast Away' quality. There were too many contrived situations to make this believable enough to enjoy as much as I thought I would. Niamh was just too naive and prudish to be realistic, which made her transformation to raunchy slut improbable. I did take one positive thing away though: next time I'm on a plane, I'll be sure to sit next to a babe in case I have to spend seven years eating coconuts with her.

I liked it until the end . Her going slutty kinda killed it .

It's difficult to suggest that these two people survived on a desert island for SEVEN years with sexual intercourse, ad infinitum, and no pregnancies. Nothing in the story suggest any preventative methods.

One of the sexiest most erotic stories I've ever read! Great writing and hot as hell!

7 years of constant fucking, And you cumming into her countless times.. and not even a Pregnancy scare? 😂 😂

A story made in heaven I must admit..

7 years The lady didn't get her periods??

Reasonable storyline until the end, then you lost me. Clearly, no love blossomed over the seven year period together. From a 19 year old Virgin Mary to a 26 year old cock hungry whore and he was no better. Plus I agree with everyone else about not falling pregnant that was quite unrealistic really especially with all the amount of sperm he was supposed to have pumped into her over six years and not even one baby come on now. For me you went from a possible ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ story to a ⭐⭐ sorry...☹️☹️☹️

But the ending ruined it.

You curmudgeons who are saying this isn't believable: You missed the point entirely. Enjoy it for what it is... one hot as hell desert island "happy ever after" fantasy. One of the best stories here. Well done!

he doesnt speak like a normal person. also the girl being that naive is so unbelievable it felt fake

Must agree it’s Kookaburra8 comments. You really did fuck this story up, a very lucky ⭐️⭐️

I also agree with Kookaburra8, it went from a great story to crap at the end.

Spoilt by the end and anal. Why does every story have to have it in there? I realize some people like it, but the majority don’t. I think it’s a carry over from the porn industry.

Read a very similar story but that hero had a fourteen (14) inch dick!