All Comments on 'The Devil's Equinox Ch. 01'

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Bianca_Sommerland over 14 years ago

Interesting

Have to read more but good start. Might want to make your chapters a little longer ;)

Dragonlipz over 14 years ago

Thank you.....

Good work, but you might want to keep in mind that your reader is getting this all from you firsthand....you're telling the story....it's yours.....

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