All Comments on 'The Dhanush Ch. 02'

It's strange, but I like it this far. So keep it up.

Not bad, but the installments are too short and the stops come at odd moments. While it might seem like it's a cliff-hanger ending, it's really not because there hasn't been a build up to some momentous event. Instead, it's just stopping the tale to stop the tale.

I'm going to waite on rating this story to see if you listen to the advice given you. These chapters really need to be longer even oif we have to waite a few days.