All Comments on 'The Diary Ch. 02'

Wow. I didn't think that such a forced scenario would excite me but Jessie's obvious consent and intense pleasure changed all that.

Well written throughout. I want more.

I'm glad she didn't have to choose. ;-)

providing a well written story with great progression of character development, believable, enviable, and very moderate in length for such a great story.

Hope you are able to complete more and publish here.