All Comments on 'The Dildo'

Nice work. Really. I don't see what you could have cut. And while the narrative is good I think the originality of the story line was fascinating - not a story done to death, exposed six or sixty different ways.

Again, thanks for sharing this with us.

Bluejacket01

I hope there is follow up on this story

Excellent work. The last paragraph really nails it - I like it. Well done!

A very, very well-told story, with an unusual/unexpected premise. Well done!

Well done! I seldom give 5 stars for stories that do not have long involved plot lines, but this story is exceptional!

This was a brilliant story! Very well crafted! I really enjoyed the efforts you made to make the main characters less than porn-stars. It works!

Well done. I hope you continue the story. Also, I like the play on "petite mort" for your user name.

Great imagination and story telling. Please bless us with more!

Please continue!

Great start, I'd like to know more about the morning after the night before...

The sex was hot, I guess, and it's nice that your main character is a decent enough guy, but... what's with making Sandy the worst human being in existence??? As a chick who is friends with her exes, this is a reprehensible thing to do and a reprehensible way to 'explain' it to your 'friend' later. What a bitch. Brian is a doormat, and he needs a spine and some new friends. Yes, this actually pissed me off so much that I can't enjoy the story. It is possible to have hot consensual (stranger) sex without someone involved being a piece of shit.

We need a sequel !

Please?

The story demands a second chapter. *****