All Comments on 'The Diner'

Whew!

Very hot story with good build up and explosive <pun intended?!!> ending....yummmmm

nicki

sex needs to be like this. Raw and animalistic. Well written. Thank you.

The action seemed cliched and also extremely improbable. The story was well written but the plot did not grab my attention. I ended up skimming over the sex because it read like a thousand other stories that I've seen.

Enjoyed the story very much - what a great ending.

Hot and sexy.

I enjoyed it. Will there be another? You've opened up a few possible stories. Of course the obvious is the waitress. But what about the teaser. Or even her and her friend. Think about it.

Susan