All Comments on 'The Dinner Party'

This is a tremendous effort for a first story. You are a little too heavy handed with the carrot and the stick for me. The swinging between harshness and reassurance were so fast and frequent, I felt whiplashed. Given Gita's background and the speed things were happening, seems she would have freaked and resisted more. Even watching how the other women were being treated would have been frightening. Peggy's reassurances were good but not enough. Good first story.

Very erotic fun story with hot sex...just way way too lengthy...