All Comments on 'The Dirtier, The Better'

What a story, i think everyone needs a girl like Erica, can she get any dirtier?

This was some kind of hot -- you have to let us know what happens next

Excellent story. Easily one of the best I've read here.

I think everyone needs to have an experience like this! I can't wait to see what happens next, please write a follow up story or another story like this!! I love your style

Very hot. But if she wanted to be as dirty as the pornos, she should have cleaned her ass up afterwards creampie style.

I always look forward to your stories DamonX

I also found this to be a wonderful story. Probably one of the best I have read here. I could picture myself, back in the college days, in his shoes. It is almost like a love story that is just starting.

One fault was that in the story he removed the red butt plug from her toy collection, and put it on the table and in a few paragraphs later, he was looking through her toys until he found the red butt plug. A little bit of editing and I could dash through the story.

Look forward to the next installment

Your stories just get hotter and hotter! Thanks!

Awesome Damon! Please write part 2

J

Having read thousands! =)

Keep on this trend if by any chance you planned a follow-up (how possible??!).

Huge Congrat's and many Thanks!

You have done it again, another home run. You do everything well, but your dialogue particularity shines. It has a realism that makes the whole story even more of a turn on.Your female characters say the sexyest things.I'm no expert, I only know what I like.In my opinion you have a breath taking mastery of this art form. If anyone dare say I exaggerate, check the other comments.Thankyou for sharing your gift.

Definetly a starter!

I loved this story! I know some women don't like that kind of sex, but that is the way I like it. Like the title of the story, The Dirtier the Better.....

Yet again Damon delivers. Easily one of the most inventive authors on the site.

Quite possibly the best story you have written yet. A good balance of character build up to sex and as fantasy goes a fairly believable set of characters.

I always look forward to your stories, and this one was excellent! Keep up the good work! Great story line and dialog.

The editing issue I noticed was that she was wearing shorts when he went to the apartment, then he was staring at her jeans later, then he removed her shorts. But I don't mean to complain--I've never tried writing something like this.

DamonX. What exceptional writing for lovers of anal-sex. It is indeed a pleasure to know that articulate men who are arse-fucking connoisseurs like you exist in the world to write about it and stimulate the brain as well as the erogenous zones. What an excellent balance you use with humour, wit, dirty desire and hardcore rimming and reaming. I've cruised through Literotica for four or more years reading most stories, especially the anal category, because in my view anal fucking is not a fetish - but a necessity. It's my opinion that you are consistently the best writer on the Literotica site for sodomy stories. I am so "moved" by your writing that instead of just jacking-off as much as a woman can jack off to pieces (written and heard) on this site, I felt moved to break my comments "hymen" and give you some feedback - yes, this is my virgin time and please don't be gentle! Keep it up (no phallic pun intended, but if you want to take it that way - go ahead)!

A follow up would be awsome. This has definatly been one of the better storylines this year

GREAT TALE .. HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!

LETS HAVE MORE

believable characters and soooo hot, cant wait for more. 10/10

One of your best. Sometimes, while reading your stories, I have the feeling that similar situations must have defined our formative years, igniting a smoldering desire for a specific region of the female anatomy.

And I just can't get enough.

Please may we have some more? Impossible to keep my hands off myself while reading this. Please PLEASE do a follow-up...

great set up, just the right length of story for the erm... "purpose". fantastic read. keep writing and i'll keep reading!

Just PERFECT

This is a wonderful story- the girl reminded me so much of myself! I'm a virgin, but I love porn and toys and anal sex especially.

I wish I was Erica, I'd love that to be done to me

great story. ive always wanted to try anal with a girl, but none i have met have like the idea :(

All I can say is: WOW!

I really love a good ass licking before have a huge cock shoved up my ass. When I lay on top of him and he fucks my ass with his tongue, I get really excited with the feeling of warmth and wetness. Watching his cock grow in my hands and mouth make the anticipation of what's to cum even greater!!!

It is very exciting and and satisfying to be well rimmed and then fucked till the hot cum fills your asshole.

I would have loved the ending to have been a little less abrupt but hey, the dirtier the better.

i would have loved there to be more positions. now i want to be filled up like that!

You still have a few kinks for her to explore. Surely he needs a piss afterwards, and surely he would enjoy using her for a urinal. Sequel, please.

I love the development from innocent to dirty, and I think it's done at just the right pace. The action is great, as it comes throughout the story. I do notice, though, that when it really starts heating up the grammar and continuity begin to degrade. Nothing major, but there are some uncapitalized words, repeat words, and repeat actions (like Damon getting the butt plug from the box twice). Still 5 stars.

I think you could have filled out the ending more, and had her eat some more cum from her ass or something else dirty like that then cleaning up his cock afterwards.

This story was absolutely perfect. Keep writing!!

Real bad this shit ! 1* !

Thanks for the super hot story. We read this together to get our juices going on this Valentines Day and it definately did the trick. It was easy to use the scenario as the base of our own role playing. I love being dirty.

Great story. Loved it. On page 3 he retrieves the red butt plug from the toy box twice. The first time setting it beside her. The second time he pulls it back out of the box and makes her suck on it. Thought you'd like to know. Doesn't ruin the story.

I loved that story. Not only how dirty it is, but also Damon's demeanor is very cool, he's not a dick to her and really pleasures her along with the hard fucking. The only thing I'd change is more description of the fucking itself, like make it longer 🥰