All Comments on 'The Dirty Old Man'

Everything in your story was superior. I identified with everything you wrote about. I'm not an old man, I don't live in Texas, and I don't drink beer but I certainly wish I did.

I'm in Seattle man for 62 yrs... love this story and was very good story. I was hoping you make another chapter 2 ???????

Minor quarrel...I think you meant supine (on the back)instead of prone (lying on one's belly), "hoarse" instead of "horse"

but what the heck, I'm 58, and lost my lady after 25 years, also. Found someone (PLEASE G-d) after 5 years and I identify with the D.O.M. Please let's have some more of this couple...I understand how you meant it as a romantic story, but it does have really good possibilities.

Signed,

An Ardent Fan

Wow ! Thanks for making my pussy so wet ! :)

Excellent story !

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Oh my soul, had to read it in segments as i got to hot. Great story. I loved it!

Marvelous HOT, JUICY SEX is developed in this story with warm affection, sparkling good humor, and mind-blowing clusters of explosive orgasms. These two are mature enough to have all the skills for SUPERSEX mellowed by rollicking laughter. I am impressed with the way their banter grows from teasing to flirting to serious LOVING. Simply a GREAT TALE (puns, friends!), even with the disturbing blemishes of poor spelling and lamentable grammatical gaffes. This couple should have a long life of deep affection and sheer fun.

Thak you for a wonderfull storie - i have read most of youre stories - and i must say that you are talented ! Maj ;o)

First, thank you for being such a great writer. Then thank you for having the vocabulary to use well. For instance using " her sex" as opposed to her pussy over and over in a story. You are able to draw a very vivid picture in one's mind to watch your story unfold. Your characters are believe able and able to talk intelligently. Please keep adding to your volume of work here. Thanks again.

Beautiful! Loved the way you write and they way you develop the characters.