by EmeliaBell
I like your writing style and found this story to be pretty hilarious. I was laughing at the same time I was feeling sorry for these two!
Anyone out there with kids know this so well.. Well done..!!!
Loved it..had us nodding with each step..and the conclusion..a real cracker..!!
Or cringe. You wonder how long it would take for them to be able to laugh about it. (if ever) If I knew this was happening to even a passing acquaintance I think I'd offer to babysit once in a while for the weekend while they used my house. (as long as they promised to change the bedding and wash it) :)
Just very well written and so much fun. God, I do remember our days of having to keep the lights on or the kids thought it was time to invade Mom and Dad's room.
Great entertainment
Thank you
PT
You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.
I do remember those days, when my three daughters were small. Yes we did get walked in on a few times. The worst? was finishing an enjoyable moment with the wife and hearing giggles from the crib that held our 18 month old middle one. At least she wasn't standing and giving applause. Or the time we just got started and a thunderstorm came through. There was a nearby strike and the thunder shook the house. We barly had time to get semi-dressed before all three were in bed with us. We still managed just fine, we just had to plan better and it did kill spontaneous acts. If you wake up before the kids do there is plenty of time.
That story actually made me laugh out loud! I'f anyone could hear me, they'd think i was mad!
I have no childeren of my own, but i hope that never hapens to me! I do remember catching my parents at it a few times though...but at 15, it was kind of sickening.... Ah well
Fantastic story, hope you do more!
Emma
This is a great story...I really enjoy the way you put words together. Thanks!