All Comments on 'The Djinn'

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KerrionKerrionabout 2 months ago

Very nice start to a story. Assuming she's a free Djinn. Would be nice to see if he can capture her.

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Good quick story. No 3 wishes, or a lamp??

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348about 6 years ago
Awesome

Great writing!! Thank you:) This will make a great series I hope:))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A good read.

I would like to see where this is going for the both of them. I never knew that a Genie could be both Good and Evil in a combo mix so not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please continue

Easily the beginning of an awesome series.

TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 6 years ago
Very well done

Thank you for sharing. 5* Slainté

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
hall of fame

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
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This was quite nice. I greatly enjoyed it. Please consider turning this into a series

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