All Comments on 'The Doctor and the Scientist'

by mistress3022

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
options

there will always be options. thanks for writing a true LW story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Once again, a good idea shot down by poor writing

It had the promise of a decent story, but the grammar was poor, and the shifts between past and present tenses was jarring.

Pass your next effort by an editor, why don't you? Don't let a good idea get torpedoed.

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 17 years ago
A great romance and loving wives story

It was very good and please do get an editor. Please keep writing as you have a talent to share.<p>PT

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Great romance? True LW story? That ain't what I read.

jocko_smithjocko_smith8 months ago

Good to read a story where a person fights for their marriage. Could use a little more proof-reading, or an editor, but the story had "good bones," so thank you.

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