by mistress3022
there will always be options. thanks for writing a true LW story.
It had the promise of a decent story, but the grammar was poor, and the shifts between past and present tenses was jarring.
Pass your next effort by an editor, why don't you? Don't let a good idea get torpedoed.
It was very good and please do get an editor. Please keep writing as you have a talent to share.<p>PT
Good to read a story where a person fights for their marriage. Could use a little more proof-reading, or an editor, but the story had "good bones," so thank you.