All Comments on 'The Doctor is In Ch. 01'

Very well written throughout. You have a nice flowing style. Oh, and the concept of this whole thing is ridiculously erotic. I look forward to the rest of it!

Wow. I always look for good medical related stories on the late shift. Sweetie, this one is a winner. I'm ready to climb up in the stirrups, myself, Every nurse has stories to tell. I've seen men in panties in the ER, women with cell phones lodged up in their vagina. Two weeks ago we had a teenage boy with a foreign object in his penis! Maybe we should have a series of "Nurse Tales". Please keep writing. This was an excellent story.

What a great start. I will be watching everyday waiting for the next chapters. I'm a male, I worked OB/Gyn ward when in the Air Force. Yes men worked the ward. Mostly the babies, but, always in the delivery room. The stories I could tell.

I would go back tomorrow if I could.

Hobojoe

I've always had a thing for nurses. It's partly the atmosphere when you're being tended by a nurse and it's partly the hidden thoughts. So why not a doctor AND a nurse? Good start and keep it focussed.

Waiting eagerly for the next Chapters! I work in the Medical Profession and love Nurses (female). :-)

Fantastic story. I'm bowled over by it. I too have had some nurse fantasies in my life, and this really "hit the spot." Great writing too. The build up is great. My only constructive criticism would be that it could be edited just a tad to make it a little shorter. Otherwise, I can't wait to hear more.

Interesting take on the old Doctor/patient scenario, looking forward to see where it goes.

MGM

Fabulous, and hell YES, you should keep going.

Loved the first part of your story and hope that you submit the next episode soon.

Definitely continue! For a first submission, you did fantastic!! I don't even think I saw any errors, and if I did, I was too engrossed in your story to see them! lol I love the topic, being in the home health care arena myself. Hmmm .. maybe I should write along the nursing topic as well, seeing all the positive feedback is really nice, as a reader, and for you as a writer. Good job!

Wonderful first attempt. Like the rest, I'm waiting with baited breath!

Please continue! And Hurry--you've got me extrremly excited!

Loved it!! Great story line! YES, Continue....

Please keep going cant wait to read more!!!!

please write more chapters

FANTASTIC STORY THE DOCTOR IS IN CH1

WOW EXCELLENT WRITING. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE

For a first, an even a last, story this is excellent! About to continue with ch2

You definitely should write a second part. I would love to know how the "exam" turns out.

I've not seen a story along these exact lines before. This is what happens for my partner and from time to time as we plan with a play gyno dr. what will likely take place during exams. The brother connection is interesting and the female to female planning is exciting to read ... waiting for each erotic detail to emerge. I'd really like to see more of this story PLEASE. ml

Hope you are still getting your comments feedback. This is one of those stories that touch so many naughty likes...cannot wait to read more. Its sweet too in a strange way.

Plz keep going...u have pulled me in!!!

Liked your story, I recently spent 4 months in hospital and learnt some new things about life.......

YES!!!

Would be fun to be that doctor!

Great story line and building sexual tension....

Interesting premise.

But all backstory.

Perhaps a few details of the 'patient's' fantasies would have spiced it up.

And, you may need an editor/proofreader.

You wrote: "...and I knew exactly what he was inferring." You meant IMPLYING not INFERRING.

Imply means to suggest or to say something in an indirect way. Infer means to suppose or come to a conclusion, especially based on an indirect suggestion.

Four stars based on potential.