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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The ravelling of a mystery!

I like the tension so far! There are hints of upcoming lasciviousness that have me looking forward to chapter 3. The telling of Liam's tale really gives depth and context to this mystery(?) sailing sex story.

Keep up the great work and don't let the sun explode!

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Thanks for reading my stories. I appreciate the comments and helpful feedback. Cover art for CELTIC MIST and A NEW YORK HAUNTING viewable at: https://www.amazon.com/C-L-Nightjar/e/B09C4WGXYT/ref=dp_byline_cont_pop_ebooks_1 https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/clnightjar