All Comments on 'The Door'

But could use an editor.

EOM.

I had to stop after the fourth paragraph. Jarring misuse of words and spelling errors take the fun out of reading.

Definitely within athletic size, especially if he is even moderately tall. That was my clue that you know nothing about what you write.

You’ve got good ideas, but you need a proofreader.

I couldn’t finish page 1.