All Comments on 'The Double Date That Didn't End Ch. 03'

Is that there isn't a SIX star option I could give you!

Don't make us wait long. Great story.

You are quickly becoming my favorite literotica writer. I like that your characters seem real and relatable and most of all normal. Plus the girls are hot as hell and the sex is a real turn on. Please keep up the great work!

Please continue the story. I enjoy your writing!

Your stories are excellent, i've read every single one from Bosom Buddies right down to this latest masterpiece and I've enjoyed every single one of them.

Please do carry on writing, this is clearly your forte.

Another great story. Love your writing!

I can't wait for the next chapter, I can see things really getting interesting and if it's at all possible, more enjoyable.

Islandic

Not generally a fan of partner-swapping, but this story is well-done; well-written, well-characterized, just generally enjoyable. Do continue!

Your stories are great. They are so greatly told, I loved the Waiting Game. This story is looking to be great too. I'm waiting for the next chapter, its stories like these that help me stop watching porn. Keep up the good work.

P.S. It would be great to make Tracy titfuck Shane.

The story is well paced, entertaining, and satisfies all parts of the mind! You writing style entices the reader with a sort of 'visual elloquence', that far surpasses the efforts of other authors (... Who's literary contributions - quite honestly - sometime seem more appropriate for the bathroom walls at the gas station).

I look forward to reading the next installment of this delightfully twisted quartet!

Excellent build-up with slowly building sexual tension: will they swap partners or will it get into an all-out sexual orgy with the four of them ??? I can't even start imagining the possibilities: double fellatio, closed circuit lovemaking, double penetration???

That was fucking incredible! As hot as anything I've read in a long time.

Wow. Probably shouldnt have read that work. Lol

Great pacing and dialog once again but ... one small slip. "So, when my boss offered to let Ria and I spend Christmas at his place in the Sierra Nevadas, it was a minor dream come true."

Rita and me.

I laughed so hard at the ending!!!! lol it was like one big practical joke

Superb story.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Fuck that was hot!