All Comments on 'The Double Date That Didn't End Ch. 01-02'

How is a guy with muscles on muscles invisible and/or a teddy bear to some but a stud to others? Doesn't make sense to me.

A superb sequel to the Bosom Buddies series. Well developed characters and very real, very believable interactions.

A true story of love, lust and friendship.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

I really liked this, especially the characters' awareness of the tension and lines they don't want to cross. I would love to see how that develops.

I love your characters. I'm rooting for all of them, which I didn't think would be the case at the beginning of the story. The tension between them was delicious. The dialogue was perfect. They talk like I do. I'm looking forward to the second installment!

I liked your characters, plot, pacing etc. A truly good read.

I always enjoy your work

good read. you kept rooting your characters on. you also have this set up for a 2nd chapter which i hope you write.......partner switching???

Once again, we get a positively brilliant yarn to read. Sweet, hot, properly paced, simply brilliant.

In the end kind of romantic.

I usually get sick to the stomach when there is fooling around on partners and such, but this was handled in such a way to leave me with a " I've just read a really well told story" feeling, all warm and fuzzy. Well done.

I read "The Waiting Game" while waiting for this second part and really liked it, too. Guess I'll have to start reading the "Bosom Buddies" series while I wait to see if there is another part to this series, or if you come up with something new for your next effort. But I will be watching for whatever you present for our entertainment next!

Good stuff.

More? Anal, please?

Lots of possibilities here that I am certain to enjoy. :-)

The Santa bachelorette party is the hottest part of the series. I know you finished this story at chapter 7, but you could easily continue on with it.

I would have given this story 6 stars if I could have. Beautifully paced and well written. I know this seems like a low bar, but the spelling and grammar are flawless, which is a rare thing on this site. Not a single "it's" for "its" or "lay" for "lie"! Thank you.

Fine except for the beginning swapping.

That always bodes a tumult.

Bill S.

Just read the below comment from Roboboy about grammar.

I believe it must be an age related thing, but after an ‘if’ another speculative word, the tense changes like so: “if I were to ask you.” Not if I was to ask you.”

Bill S.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work! Gee... i wonder where this is going? Heh,heh, heh...

Oh very good, oh I just seen you have done a part 3, great character and description