All Comments on 'The Double Team Ch. 03: Operation J'

by asdfman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice

Hopefully they turn some more girls into double team converts

DrmaxcDrmaxcover 7 years ago

I like your tag on part 2, 'almost bi-sexual.' I don't fancy men but it must be great fun to do something like this. Really mates together! I suspect it really would be, as you wrote in part 2, 'It felt amazing for them and didn't feel gay.'

This part seemed a little short. You could have extended it with more description but nonetheless Cole and Frank succeeded with their plan - perhaps Jenny being a bit too easily won over, perhaps a little too accommodating (!).

To have the 'Double Team' make other 'converts' seems a little improbable though possibly Jenny might have a friend who discovers what she is up to. Better to see what happens when, next time, it is Jenny who calls the team to action.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing

Keep 'em coming....

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