All Comments on 'The Downfall Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Epically stupid

Super strength industrial glue?? Not going to hold those fake breats for anytime at all. Even a two part epoxy is worthless on human skin for any length of time. At least know more about your subject or don't write about it. And his life isn't going to change much when he walks out , gets a rape kit done, has stitches to his torn rectum and then reports the rape to the Police. Plus which, when the jackass sticks his dick into his mouth? Bite that sucker off. End to stupid story. You give no thought to consequences in this unbelievable mess. This was bad even for fiction.

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