All Comments on 'The Dream'

by FirstBaseAce

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IdiotsavantIdiotsavantabout 8 years ago
Confusing?

I am assuming that this is the first chapter of a multi-chapter effort. There are too many open questions that are brought up in this chapter that make no sense if ended here. A letter was referred to, what was in the letter and how did he get it? He dreamed that she was getting done in a three-way. What brought out that image? She has cut back on relations with him over the last few weeks. What had happened to cause that?

Looking forward to getting some answers.

Thanks for a good first effort.

FirstBaseAceFirstBaseAceabout 8 years agoAuthor
Apologies

Yes. This is a first chapter. I forgot to include that in my title. There are about 6 chapters as I have it now.

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