All Comments on 'The Dream'

Good story it could become a series or a least another chapter to it. the spelling could be a little better and the gramer needs a little work but other than that it was a very good story.

I love the idea, but the way this story needs a lot of work. The spelling is horrible, the grammar is equally bad and the sentence structure is redundant and simplistic. I think if you rewrote this story with intent to enrich the contents and characterizations (they were very shallow), you could have a decent story.

PLEASE CHECK YOUR USE OF WORDS AND THEIR PROPER SPELLING.