All Comments on 'The Drop-In'

I enjoyed your story, although I wish it had been a bit longer to explore what was really going on with the two women and the breakup.

One criticism I have is that you seem to skip over the details of clothing and descriptions. For instance, he cums on Amanda's tits, but I never read that she took her shirt off. Maybe that's nitpicking, but it ruins the continuity of the story for me. There is no description of what Sara looks like at all, we just find out near the end that her hair is auburn and that's it. She also never undresses, but is rubbing her pussy and tits on Amanda as though she were nude. Was she naked when she came in? Why not mention it if she was? That would be hot like she was waiting outside getting ready.

Overall a good story, gave me a woody!