All Comments on 'The Druid Ch. 01'

Interesting concept, but there is just not enough to make it come together. The antagonist is not developed enough to be interesting, nor is the description of her appealing. I'd like to see this chapter redone with more detail.

I like it. I hope the next chapter comes soon.

I appreciate the feedback and take on board comments made.

The characters will flesh out as the story develops and the details of the world added in bite size chunks. I don't really want to bore with lore and details early in so consider this chapter an introduction only.

One thing i will add is the comment around not appealing is kind of delibrate and play a part in upcoming chapters. I know this but understand readers can only go by what is seen and not what is planned.

Thanks to those who have read and voted it means a lot. Whilst there is interest i'll keep writing it. Expect Chapter 2 possibly this side of new year if i can find an editor over the feastive period.