by Brie_de_Jour
Oh I loved it!! I hope you wrote more of their story. Especially about Willamina being used by many more!! She deserves it!
Very easy and enjoyable read. Did she conceive in the prison mating? Did he sire more children; as I can see them spending a good deal of time in bed with his large cock buried in her belly.
A very enjoyable story. It was an easy read with lots of lovey sex and very few typos! Well done!
I meant to glance over earlier chapters to gauge the story's history, and have become hooked into reading the damn thing backwards. Still a fun reading experience.
The first part I thought stood on its own. I still think I was right, but with this chapter you've improved the story immensely. I was ready for Black Jack to die, and for his son and mother to comfort each other, her with memories of the brief encounters with a true love, and him with a bitter memory of the end of his father's life, but listening rapt to his mother's tales of him, and his adventures beyond their time together. You surprised me, however, and in quite the corny way, to boot, but I confess I loved it. Your writing is superb. Five stars and kudos, JB Edwards