All Comments on 'The Duchess Ch. 01: Fun & Games'

Not believable .

I gave the story a 5 to help with your ratings!! Eat shit anony!

Vert vert good!!! More please

How i'd love to be him. Great story!

This story is also not my thing and so it isn't my favorite either, but it has a more complex dynamic going on than what is found in your naughty schoolgirl story so I ranked it higher. The descriptions are more vivid and I appreciated that. I liked how the story began with action to create interest. I also thought it was interesting how he submitted to a person who first demonstrated her superiority to him in game. Nice touch! The Domme's personality is quite flat and under developed. This is, I think, typical for this perhaps better-written-than-usual wank fodder for male subs. Keep writing!