All Comments on 'The Education Of Richard Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story

I loved it, it is well written, I will be waitng for part 2 to cum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lost

You lost me in the second paragraph with GG cup tits. I didn't bother with the rest. Do you people really know how huge that is? It's not natural and i've never met a woman that large before. They exist, i know.<p>It's silly stories like this that propagate this site these days. It isn't worth even a vote except i have to vote to leave a comment.<p>Grow up. Most readers like reality.

blackfenblackfenover 14 years ago
i liked it

good work i enjoyed it..looking forward to chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
re: Lost

I stayed with it longer than you, but when it reached him having a 23" cock, that's when it destroyed any fantasy value and entered the realm of the ridiculous and the inane.

shagalotshagalotover 14 years ago
Bad with a capital B

Totally unrealistic in any way , like others i gave up after the 23 inches , you do have a good imagination so why not put it to some use and try writing a proper erotic story ,im sorry but i have read some rubbish on this site over the years ,and i dont think i have ever given a 00 mark before but this deserves a minus score to be honest

BarelyLegal4now89BarelyLegal4now89over 14 years ago
Talk about balls!!

I'm a "balls" woman myself so I loved your descriptions!! A bit hard to swallow(excuse the pun!!) but that's why it was so great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Liked it

Nice. Liked the fact that he beat up another man (or rather boy) out of possesive jealousy. More of that, please. ;-)

brian358brian358over 14 years ago
Wow!

Absolutely phenomenal story!

I love your stories and can't wait to read Part 02.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
The Queen is back

Been waiting for a new story from you for a while now and i see you still got it. Excellent descriptions, great sex as usual. All I can say is keep the stories cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Write faster. Jesus Christ you start all this shit then you never finish it, come on it's not like you have a life outside of writing erotic fiction,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
really!

cum on 23 inches why not just make it 48 inches and have 4 women use their hands all over it sorta unreal

LikeFineWine1LikeFineWine1about 13 years ago
wild stuff

i didn't think i would be, but i am a fan

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Loved it! A Mom with huge udders and a massively hung son, and they fuck. How cool is that!

birddog22birddog22about 7 years ago
beautiful

great story very hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No

I find this story absolutely disgusting. Wish I had not found it. No mom should ever debauch her own flesh and blood like this. Minus minus minus 100. Call herself a mom? No way!

I did not read every nasty word. Rushed to the end to see if anybody actually liked it. And they actually did...!

Look at your own kids...would you do this to them? Please say NO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
weak

Although its hot when theres huge cock in descriptions 23inches is just a joke. he would lose consciousness just from getting full hard on, fantasy is fantasy right.... its really strange with these oversized "things" and when the female takes it like its nothing after few mins. besides the mom is described more like a slut or sth. would have been better with some relative with more personality(tho who reads it for that). anw pretty decent read but definitely nothing worth reading again. 2/5

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