All Comments on 'The Elemental Ch. 01'

I liked it, not bad at all..Hopefully soon there will be more =)

It has a very interesting start. i cannot wait for you to continue. I hope you update soon and make the chapters a little longer. Good work.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

more more please

Nice start. Looking forward to more.

can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it so far, I like the vampire elemental combination too. It's usually vampire/human or vampire/vamire and sometimes vampire/were. Can't wait for the next chapter

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Great so far!

Although one's interest is piqued, not peaked.

Very interested to read to more. Thankfully I have a few chapters I can begin straight after writing this :-) Great start!

Love the beginning and I'm off to read the rest!

...why so many non human stories start in night clubs, LOL. Seriously though intriguing beginning, I can't wait to read more.

***** i know this story from JC favorit story

....way too short. I was so wrapped up in the story I almost screamed when I saw the 'to be continued' pop up. Lucky for me this is finished or I would be cursing up a storm right about now. Great start you are truly a gifted story teller.

If the rest of the series proves just as interesting ...

but remain too bad that you do not write anything for 2 years ...

Ok u got me hooked. To keep reading the next chapter...