All Comments on 'The Elevator'

by penguinlust

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More!!!!!!!

Whate hapins next?

Karyn GardeniaKaryn Gardeniaalmost 16 years ago
A good start

Why not expand this somewhat? It's a nice scenario, but it's a little bit abrupt after several paragraphs of set-up. I'm also curious as to how this story is categorized as non-consent. Great writing...I'd love to see more.

SinsiousSirenSinsiousSirenover 15 years ago
Attention getter

Cant wait to see his next elevator ride!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

pointless

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