All Comments on 'The Elevator'

This is hot!! And had me smiling all the way through - I loved the humour. I can't deny being a sucker for a workplace fantasy, but this was short, sweet and just right! My favourite thing is being left wondering...did he know, and if so, how!?

Thank you :)

(MORE please!)

A short well-crafted tale. I loved it.

You gotta love a woman with such a vivid imagination...and even better, such an intuitive man.

Exquisite daydreaming material for my next elevator ride, that's for sure.

Oh, so like a woman to be noticing shoes at such a moment! Lovely, whimsical and hot. I gave you 5 stars just for putting “pasta salad” in your tags! HA!

The first half of the story had me laughing at myself as much as at your story--it's amazing how much sexier I am in my fantasies, too. And just when I thought I had it figured out that the erotic encounter was all in her imagination, it happens in real life. Thanks for the delightful little read.

The Donald would relate to this.

What a pleasant quickie.... the event and the writing.