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Click hereIn hopes of calming her nerves and getting his thoughts under control, Mr. Adams added: "Ms. Manarro, I am hiring you. Employment will be probationary for six months. I am taking a huge risk by not completing this interview properly. Helen will accompany you to our clinic in just a few minutes. Once I have our Doctor's report we will set a start date for you." Mr. Adams hit the speakerphone calling Helen back to his office. "Take Adriana to the clinic. Tell the doctor I want the report as soon as possible."
Helen bustled into Mr. Adams' office nodding to him in understanding then turned to Adriana. "Ms. Manarro, follow me please."
The women left the office. Walking back to the reception area to the elevator, Helen then pushed the call button. Entering the elevator, Helen pulled out what looked like a credit card and slid it down the track of an electronic reader, that Adriana hadn't noticed when she arrived. As the car began to ascend, Helen continued with her instructions, "The physical you are about to undergo will be intensive. You will be exhausted when it is completed. I have made arrangements for you to stay in one of our on-site suites. Our driver, Kyle is on the way to your apartment with the keys from your purse, to get some personal items for your comfort. Is there anything in particular that you would like him to include?"
Adriana's mind was in a whirl. I got the job... I. Got. The. Job.... I GOT THE JOB! Beyond that thought, she couldn't think of anything important! "Helen there is a book on the nightstand by my bed. May I have that please?" she asked.
Helen looked over the rim of her glasses. With an annoyed sigh, she told Adriana, "The bag will be there at the suite when you arrive. I will call you in the morning with your next instructions from Mr. Adams. Good luck with the physical Ms. Manarro."
"Good luck? With a physical? Exhausted? From a physical exam?" Adriana thought she detected a certain something, a sort of 'aha' in Helen's voice? "What was that about?" For a moment she had a feeling she was not being told the whole truth. "Never mind," she told herself. "I got the job!"
- COMMENTS
magee113over 10 years agoAuthorI am happy to tell you all that The Elite Broker Chapter 4 is now in the submission process. I hope to see it post to the site by this time next weekend.
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magee113over 10 years agoAuthorChapter 4 is on its way, I promise. I've had a small glitch that has put a short delay on it's submission to Lit. I hope to have it wrapped up in the next couple of days and online by this time next week. So sorry for the hiccup. Hope everyone had a relaxing, long weekend! Smiles and hugs for all of you!
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magee113over 10 years agoAuthorHello Readers,
To those of you enjoying the story so far, chapter 3 has been submitted and should be available by the weekend - I hope.
I look forward to your continued reviews and votes!
Hope you are having a great week!
koinonia_92almost 11 years agoI'm very impressed with the detail and lead in to this story and I am reading chapter 2 next. Very few editorial mistakes and nothing large enough to detract from the story. Please continue as my expectations are very high based on the start! As for the anonymous individuals that hide behind their keyboards, do not waste your breath or time. Your efforts are appreciated thus far…
magee113almost 11 years agoAuthorI LOVE your comments and reviews! But PLEASE create an account (its free to join)or if you already have one, 'LOGIN'.
As a fledgling writer my wings are still unstable and I may or may not fly in the right direction.
YOUR WORDS, whether kind, excited or harsh and grumpy help me to learn and grow as a writer. By letting me see who you are, I can contact you personally in thanks or to delve into what you might see as needing tweaked or strengthened.
YOU are the ones that I am writing for!!!
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Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIt sure looks like this is another mind control story, with the exact nature of how they do it to be revealed. Perhaps of the bimbo species.
magee113almost 11 years agoAuthorAdriana is by no means a silly little bimbo tra-la-la-ing happily looking to simply 'fall' into submission. "help me...help me..." Damn! *zipping my lip!* Oops, I've said too much. You will just have to stay tuned to find out. AGAIN!! Thank you all so much!!!
LBGrantalmost 11 years agoWelcome to Lit magee113! This was a great start and you already have a lot of people commenting and taking notice so good job. You have setup an interesting start here and I will be watching to see where you take it. As always, FA_JF hit the nail on the head with her comment.
~LB
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoDamn, way to kill it. Every time an author writes one of these stories and uses the word "submissive" you just know that the highly intelligent and professional young female is going to turn into a retarded doormat who doesn't know the difference between prostitution and career growth.
No thanks.
mickymouse113almost 11 years agoGood build up but please let her fight and win some. Perhaps she wants to leave at the end and ruin all the resources they invested in her despite remaining submissive.
